“Helping writers uncover the emotional heart of their story.”
THE MISSION?
“My mission is to help writers uncover the emotional truth beneath their story — crafting characters, relationships, and moments that readers don’t just understand, but deeply feel.”
TESTIMONIALS
"Working with Jess gave me the confidence I needed to keep going. She gave me easy, quick, and actionable goals that made my story so much stronger.
Tyler D. Davis
"I found Jessica on TikTok! She helped me see my story in a completely new way. Her advice was thoughtful, encouraging, and focused on what would make my readers want to turn the page."
Ariana S.
I was struggling to figure out why my novel wasn’t landing, and her feedback completely changed that. She helped me strengthen my characters, sharpen the emotional arcs, and finally make the story feel alive.
Maria Hernandes
SERVICES
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The Beta Reader
Beta reading focuses on emotional impact, character connection, pacing, and overall
reader experience. I help authors identify what’s working, what’s missing, and where
their story can resonate more deeply with readers.
You will receive detailed reader feedback covering:
Emotional engagement
Character likability and development
Pacing and scene flow
Areas where readers may disconnect
Suggestions for strengthening emotional impact and immersion
Perfect for writers wanting honest, thoughtful feedback before moving forward with
revisions.
Starting at $75-$250+
Pricing varies based on manuscript length and depth of feedback requested.
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The Story Deep Dive
A collaborative coaching experience designed to help writers strengthen the
emotional heart of their story while working through the areas that feel stuck,
unclear, or underdeveloped.
Together, we’ll dive into your manuscript’s characters, emotional arcs, relationships,
pacing, and overall story structure to uncover what’s working, what’s missing, and
how to create a stronger emotional connection with readers.
This package may include:
Detailed developmental feedback
Scene and chapter discussion
Character and relationship analysis
Emotional beat and pacing guidance
Brainstorming and story problem-solving
Live coaching discussions and actionable next steps
Perfect for writers wanting deeper guidance and personalized support without
committing to ongoing coaching.
Starting at $125–$350+
Pricing varies based on manuscript length, preparation time, and level of feedback
requested.
The Ongoing Support
For writers wanting continued guidance throughout the writing process, ongoing
support offers personalized feedback, encouragement, brainstorming, and
accountability as your novel develops.
This package is ideal for writers who want a collaborative coaching experience with
consistent support along the way.
Ongoing support may include:
Chapter-by-chapter feedback
Line-by-line emotional and developmental critique
Voice and character consistency guidance
Brainstorming and problem-solving sessions
Accountability check-ins
Email or message support between sessions
Whether you need help strengthening emotional beats, untangling plot issues, or
staying motivated through the writing process, I’ll be there to help you shape your
story every step of the way.
Starting at $250-$800+ monthly
Pricing varies depending on manuscript needs, feedback depth, and level of ongoing
support.
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Please Note
We do not use AI to read, critique, edit, or analyze manuscripts.
Every service is completed by a real person.